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I'M SO SORRY IT'S SO LATE, NINDAKARISNA!!!!!

I was short of one marker and I couldn't go buy it 'cause I have no car ._.

I really hope she likes it! I learned a new way of coloring eyes with this piece, so it became important. I hope she enjoys it as much as I did making it!

The colors are a little off.
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:star::star::star::star: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Impact

I really like it. The colouring is great. I supose they look a bit different (maybe brighter). The folding of the clothes is very realistic, also the colouring (esspecially of his jeans)
I really love the way you drew your hair. It looks awesome. I really like the complete impact of the picture, saying all the good things would take to long. <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt=":)" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title=":) (Smile)"/>
However I (master of finding minor mistakes ins others artworks) noticed one or two mistakes you can't find at first. The boys font hand has, how should I say it, his fingers are kinda cut, they just stop after the girls leg. The girls left foot wouldn't fit in her left shoe at that position. The shoe is a bit too low.
Two things that irritate me: the boys neck...is a bit too long.
And one last thing. The shading in thebackground. Are they lying on the ground? Or standing, if they would do so, something is a bot wrong. I'm sorry for my constructive critique. But I really like that picture. Keep on the great work.
Sorry for my bad english, I'm not a native speaker.